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Guys Like Us

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"Will you come on? Your hair will never be tamed, let's just go." Dave was leaning against the wall by the door of their house with one foot on the wall like a cool kid. His stomach was grumbling.
"Fine" John sighs and walks out of the bathroom. He was never satisfied with the way his hair looked, especially compared to Dave's golden locks that seemed to almost *never* stray from perfect. Dave always claims his hair looks fine, but John never believes it. "So where to?"
"This sick new burger place just opened up and Bro says it's the bomb, so it must be."
"Burgers? Dave really?" John whines
"Shut up. You'll like it, I promise." Dave opens the door and is greeted by a gust of warm springtime air, just the way he liked it. The two exited their house and walked the short distance to Dave's red flame streaked sports car parked on the street.
"It's too hot!" John whines.
"We've been outside for a total of 5 seconds John." He's always like this when the temperature's anything above what Dave considers freezing. The derp just loves his cold weather.
John slid into the passenger side and Dave walked around to the driver's side and they were off, zooming down the street because Dave almost never drove reasonably when he was hungry. Sooner that John thought, the car stopped and they were at the place. It doesn't look like anything special, black and white checkered awnings with no text above or on them. They must still be working on that John thinks. Dave gets out of the car and practically flash-steps inside he's so hungry. John quickly follows.
There's no line, and the place is fairly empty for how good it's supposed to be. There's a couple sitting in a booth and a few guys at sitting at the counter.
"I'll take the biggest burger you have with everything on it, except onions." Dave says to the cashier, successfully keeping his cool considering how hungry he is. John hasn't even had time to get a proper glance at the menu before the cashier is looking at him expectantly, and slightly annoyed. He settled on the first turkey burger he saw. It was supposed to have a special sauce on it, which made John skeptical, but he didn't really care at this point, because even though Dave's shades were on, John could tell Dave was staring at him like he's the one preventing him from being one step closer to his food.
"Uh, the number 4 turkey burger with everything."
The cashier punches in some things the register and snaps her gum. "Your total is $14.13" Dave tosses a twenty at her and tells her to keep the change, thinking it would make him get his food faster, even though John could see them already working on the order in the back. It has to be their order, because there's no one else around to order anything. The whole place was empty now. The cook didn't even have to call the order number out, he just handed Dave his burger on a tray and gave him a cup to fill at the fountain drink machine. Same with John.
Dave didn't bother with the drink and sat down to immediately start chowing down on his moster burger about the size of John's head. There's no sauce or food flying anywhere, nothing's even falling out of hid burger onto the tray. His white scratched CD shirt stays pristine and food free. It was always a wonder how Dave managed to do that, considering he ate like a ravished animal.
The two sat silently, eating their food. It wasn't silent for long, when there was a huge bang as the door to the place came crashing in, followed by…
--Minutes (but not many) in the past.--
Sorry! This was up for a little bit until I realized that I made a mistake. This is how it's supposed to start, I just got ahead of myself. So here's the slightly edited version and again, sorry. There's not DaveXJohn in this chapter... but there will be. I promise.

Sorry for the misleading preview

(This is a lyric inspired fic! Let's see if you can guess the song. I'll reveal it in a few chapters anyway)


John and Dave (c) Hussie

Chapter 1: Where it all begins!!
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
Chapter 8: [link]
Chapter 9: [link]

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